Week 8

Feb. 29th, 2012 10:52 pm
1)Richard Wilbur, Lorna Crozier, and Harry Thurston all use extended metaphors within their poems that represent life. In “The Writer,” Wilbur uses first the idea of a voyage by boat, heavy with cargo, to represent his daughter’s life. The cargo symbolizes the emotional baggage his daughter already has and the author acknowledges that “some of it [is] heavy” (line 8). In the second half of his poem, Wilbur switches to image of a bird struggling to free itself from inside the house. The bird is representative of his daughter’s struggle through childhood and adolescence; you may be pushed down again and again, but you have to get up and try again. At the end of the poem the author states “it is always a matter...of life or death” (lines 31/32) and I think that this has its very obvious meaning but also the factor of adolescence in which everything feels so much bigger than it really is. When you are young so much truly is the end of the world, and parents need to remember this. In her poem “Packing for the Future: Instructions,” Lorna Crozier breaks the human lifespan into a series of seemingly ordinary items: socks, an old tin box, a ball of string. And also into the abstract things that some might say make us human: sadness, language, dreams. These things all represent something that most people carry with them for at least a part of their life. The poem would be incomplete, however, without its final lines: “Always travel lighter than the heart.” (lines 39/40) This is Crozier’s wisdom that she hopes to pass on to her readers; the other items in the poem are things that may differ from person to person, or could be interchangeable with other items, but this final piece of wisdom is a universal need for a happy life. “Miracle,” by Harry Thurston is simple and sweet, with an extended metaphor that is easy to spot. The strawberry blossom represents his daughter who will eventually grow and turn into something new, just as the blossom will become a fruit. Thurston recognizes that the change from seed to blossom to fruit is miraculous, and his awe of his daughter is also reinstated. This poem is a reminder that life is amazing, and if someone were to tell you how it works you probably wouldn’t believe them right away. Hard to believe that something so small can become something so different and so wonderful--no matter if it is a woman or a strawberry.

2)“Daddy,” by Sylvia Plath is certainly only semi-autobiographical just as most of her work is. There are similarities in the poem to Plath’s real life, such as the time of her father’s death, a mention of his feet when in actuality her father died after his foot was amputated, and the confession of her own attempted suicide. Plath may have written this way (not entirely truthful) because it was easier to let her true feelings show, and perhaps is was less painful to turn real events into a fictional story. It is also possible that the final lines of the poem (“daddy, daddy, you bastard, I’m through”) were her way of foreshadowing her own death for anyone who cared to notice. I am not sure if Plath would have agreed with the idea that “there is no autobiography; there is only art and lies.” Her writing is extremely telling of her true life and feelings and though it may not always be factual there is always a feeling of truth behind it. Having said that, her writing is also art; it has things added to make it more interesting or to improve its sound, and this is not as easily done if something is entirely 100% truthful.
1) Antigone can be described as a women who valued her family, valued her self respect and expect a great deal out of her life .whereas Creon can be described as a practical man who valued his state over the individuals.However i feel like Antigone fits with the criteria of a "tragic hero". For instance, Antigone's action was more heroic than her uncle's action because, she defied the power of the state out of love for her brother and faith in her conscience" I was born to join in love, not hate that is my nature"(498), and she spoke out against the king in this manner. She was first a woman and second she knew that her fate could be sealed if she didn't try to apologize for her crimes.Antigone followed her well and buried her brother and then she committed suicide but after she had sought glory. During the play ,my emotions were horror, pity and sympathy.on the other hand Creon believes that while hes's alive "no woman is going to lord(love) over (him)"(498).Antigone valued the laws of the god more than the laws which were made by men. But her uncle Creon saw his laws more important than the god's laws and Creon has lost everything , he lost his sonand his wife by the results of his own misguided actions.Due to this differences this play can not be called creon in lieu of Antigone.

2)The following definition was obtained from grammer.about.com:

Extended Metaphor: Literary (as opposed to ordinary-language) metaphors that are consciously (as opposed to out of necessity) sustained throughout a text or discourse (as opposed to isolated use).

An example of a story that features an extended metaphor is “Dresses,” by Lisa Bissonnette. In her story, Bissonnette uses dresses to symbolize femininity, and the different stages of maturity that women go through during their lifetimes. Each dress is used to symbolize a different stage. The first dress “comes [at] an age when we pass from taffeta to soft crepe”(300) and symbolizes early puberty, when a young girl is longing to be a woman, and is just beginning to realize what that might mean. The second dress makes you feel as though you are “dismantling the pleasure of [the future] in advance.” (302) It symbolizes the teenage years when seeming older then you are is of the utmost importance. The third dress is trickier in the story; it appears to symbolize the young woman’s desire to fully become a woman and lose her virginity, but when it turns out that her friend is not interested in her sexually she is able to stay off this momentous occasion for awhile longer. I believe that the third dress symbolizes the secret desire to have more time, and to not grow up. Somewhere in the back of her head this young woman realises that sex and relationships complicate things, and taking this step will change everything for ever. Sometimes having more time is a gift.
1) I think the most interesting part of studying literature in this class has been getting to read other people’s opinions and views on the material we read. I have been reading since I can remember, and my mom used to teach high school English, so I have always been encouraged to read, but I’ve never really shared my thoughts on literature with a group before—it has been enlightening, entertaining, and (at times) disappointing. I continue to hope I can get over my scepticism of trying to analyze someone else’s work. I really find it hard to believe that Shakespeare, for example, meant for his readers to get as much out of his work as we put on it today. I have a hard time not being critical of overanalyzing writing of any kind, but I am trying to put that aside for this class. I am concerned that I may be doing these blogs completely wrong...I wish we got marked on them every week.

2)Looking ahead
The following definitions were obtained from www.dictionary.com:

Hamartia: the flaw in character which leads to the downfall of the protagonist in a tragedy.

Oedipus’ tragic flaw is perhaps his strong desire not to fulfil the prophecy he believes he is meant for. He is so disdainful, alarmed, and frightened by the prophecy that he leaves his home to avoid it. He does not act carefully, or think morally, on his journey, if he had perhaps his true father would not have been killed, leaving his true mother available for marriage.

Hubris: (in Greek tragedy) an excess of ambition, pride, etc., ultimately causing the transgressor’s ruin.

Oedipus’ is so arrogant and proud that he believes his own rule of Thebes will end their hard times. When things worsen he becomes obsessed with finding out who murdered the former king, not thinking that it could have been him (he is not exempt from the crime of murder).

Catharsis: the purging of the emotions or relieving of emotional tensions, especially through certain kinds of art, such as tragedy or music.

Catharsis is featured in the play in a way I suppose, but the characters do seem to be cathartic in ways that are much more extreme then may be necessary. Oedipus’ (upon learning he has fulfilled the prophecy) curses himself and gouges his eyes out, and his mother kills herself because of her shame and grief. Catharsis through singing a song, or painting a picture might be a bit less harmful overall.

Peripeteia: a sudden turn of events or an unexpected reversal, especially in a literary work.

Oedipus’ whole life seems to be a long road of unexpected reversals. Is born royalty, then cast aside for dead, but found and raised as a peasant. He leaves as a traveller, becomes a murderer, defeats a mythical beast, and becomes a king. Then he blinds and exiles himself from his home and family. Of course, you could also say that this is all just part of the prophecy and, therefore expected.

Anagnorisis: (in ancient Greek tragedy) the critical moment of recognition or discovery, especially preceding peripeteia.

When Oedipus discovers who his real parents are, and what he has done, it is absolutely the critical moment of discovery. It shapes the whole ending of the play: the suicide, the blinding, and the exile.
1) There is significant to understanding the point of view of the narrator or the family dynamics in the story .Obasan Kogawa’s best-known work, tells the story of one Japanese Canadian family living through World War II. Although a work of fiction, Kogawa describes events based on her own life and the novel aims to present an historically accurate picture of the Japanese Canadian wartime experience. During the war, many Japanese Canadians endured brutal mistreatment in silence, rather than voicing their anger or standing up for their rights. In Obasan, Kogawa conveys the devastating effects of silence. Simply by writing the novel, she registers her refusal to keep quiet about the cruelty of racism.At the beginning of the story, the narrator comes across that her aunt’s house had seem to “shrunk over the years” (Kogawa 4) and become “more cluttered then” (Kogawa 4) she “remembers.” (Kogawa 4) .The strong imagery portray a strong picture of a tightly packed house with little room to move. It’s as if the aunt is represnting her past memories.With the resent death of her uncle and the repeated visits from her Aunt Emily, Naomi is faced with her passed that through all these years she has tried to block out. She did not only block out the bad memories but also the good ones she had with her family. Until now Naomi did not know what had happened to her mother, but after reading through her Aunt Emily’s packages, diaries and asking questions she finally figures out what happened to her. All the events that happened in her life caused her pain and never allowed her to live a life a peace. It is only after that she discovers what had happened to her mother and finds out about her past is when she is finally able to live a life of peace.

2)the most useful tip that has helped me in writing essay is by breaking down the topic into its various components and examining each thoroughly. For instance, if the topic of discussion is a festival, you can break down the essay by examining the history and origin of the festival, what are the festivities involved, what kinds of changes have come in the celebration of the festival over years, and so on. In conclusion, you can talk about the effects of the festival in today’s world, its contribution and positive effects on people and the joys of celebrating it.Clearly understanding the assignment. If the paper topic is assigned, it is important to clearly understand the assignment. Analyze the topic word by word to understand the requirements and scope of work. You might want to underline key words in the assignment and think about how they relate to the reading and/or lectures. Figure out whether you must interpret or simply state the facts. If in doubt, ask other students or the professor for clarification.
Part I

1. In his short story, “The Boat,” Alistair MacLeod uses intertextuality in a variety of ways in order to help the reader find the deeper meaning of his words. Always choosing to reference the “great” classic works of literature, he weaves his story tightly around the books his two “main” characters have spent so much time using to escape reality, but that ironically reflect their own lives in a variety of ways.The narrator of the story first makes reference of Thomas Hardy’s tragic character Eustacia Vye; he likens his mother to her physically (“tall and dark and powerfully energetic”and at first glance you could assume that is the only reason. However, if you look more closely at the two stories you will see more similarities between the two women. Both women want their husbands to be different then they are; their spouses long for a life of a learning and neither woman is happy with that desire. Both women also come to a tragic end; Eustacia throwing herself from a small dam, and Jenny alone in a house without a husband because he died doing what she wanted him to do. I believe that the narrator made reference to this literary character because of exactly what he says: she reminds him of his mother. The narrator is a lover of literature and probably sees connections all around him, seeing Eustacia as similar to his mother is a natural conclusion for him because the two women do have several things in common.Another major reference made is that of the story “Moby Dick,” by Herman Melville; the narrator’s uncle is described as being “like a latter-day Tashtego”. The obvious connection between “Moby Dick,” and “The Boat,” is that both are about boats, the sea, and fishermen. There is also a connection between the obsession Captain Ahab feels for revenge, the obsession that most of the narrator’s family appears to have with literature. It is so easy to connect to books that have a similar setting to that of your own; the narrator must have found many parallels between his own sea-faring life and that of the characters in Moby Dick. It is possible he described his uncle (and his father) as being like Tashtego because he considers them to be noble and brave in a similar way.


2.Metafiction is writing in which the writer is not trying to “lie” or “trick” the reader into believing that what they are reading is true. There are constant reminders within the writing that you are reading “fiction about fiction” (Wikipedia). An author might decide to use metafiction because they want the reader to be able to suspend their disbelief and just sink into the story. If you are constantly thinking “well that would never happen” you are immediately ripped away from the story; but if, for example, you know what you are reading about is in a book that a character in the story is reading, you are able to just continue on, knowing it does not need to fit into your world. Of course there are other ways an author can suspend a reader’s disbelief, but this is an interesting one. An example of metafiction that I love is the book (and movie), “The Princess Bride”; in the book a grandfather is reading his sick grandson a novel of the same title, and that is the story you are reading.
Part I

In her story “Boys and Girls,” Alice Munro makes the differences between the farm and cellar, the kitchen, and the upstairs bedroom very clear, using the narrator of the story to describe these places. The farm where her father works is centered around the fox pens, the narrator describes them as “tidy and ingenious” expressing her care for her father’s work place and the way he takes care of it. The cellar is described as being bright and white, and the smell as being reassuring. The kitchen, her mother’s domain, is described as being “hot and dark” and it feels like the narrator despises its sameness despite the fact that she enjoys working outside because of its ritualistic importance, which hints at a sameness there as well. The bedroom where the children sleep is the place where the children are most afraid; the unfinished room where “the things that nobody has any use for any more” are kept.There are many binaries illustrated in this story. forexample,the farm is obviously somewhere the narrator feels important while the bedroom is a place where un-useful things are keptit is been addressed that the farm is clean and the kitchen is cluttered, the kitchen is dark and the cellar is bright. Munro makes various other comments but these are the ones that captured my attention.

Part II

Thomas Hardy character Eustacia Vye is quite similar with the character of Jenny in “The Boat,” by Alistair MacLeod. They are both town beauties and they are frustrated about their husbands for their love of literature. Eustacia’s husband teaches instead of selling diamonds, while Jenny’s man wants to be educated at University instead of fishing the sea. At the end of both stories the women meet tragic endings; Eustacia killing herself because of the quilt of the death of her mother-in-law, and Jenny lived in an empty house and refused anybodys help because of her pride.
“Moby Dick,” by Herman Melville is a novel about revenge, obsession, and the damage both of these things can do. Sailors Ishmael, Queequeg, and Starbuck join one-legged Captain Ahab on his crazed hunt for the great whale Moby Dick so that he can exact his revenge on the creature for taking his leg. When they finally do find the whale the fight that ensues kills everyone except for the narrator of the story, Ishmael. This story has become a classic and has been reproduced in a variety of ways since it was published in 1851.
Jenny and her “kind” in “The Boat,” Charles Dickens’ character Ham Peggotty (from “David Copperfield) loves the sea. Ham lives with his uncle Daniel Peggotty and his finance and cousin Little Em’ly because both of them have been orphaned. Em’ly leaves Ham for another man, and Ham later drowns rescuing this other man, Steerforth, who has deserted Em’ly. Ham suffers more than almost anyone in the novel, as most of the other characters are granted a happy ending.
Part I

This poem does not fit the criteria for "great literature".It seems like the author is angry. Perhaps he lived through a really messed up childhood. In either case, he tries to show the reader how he sees things and how messed up everything is. “This Be the Verse” does everything right to pull a reaction out of anyone.Larkin writes this poem with a very simple rhyme scheme and rhythm.Each statement is very to the point, lacking explanation. The poem concludes by instructing the reader to “not have any kids.” The poem concludes by instructing the reader to “not have any kids.” He is interested in getting others to consider both sides of the fence when it comes to parenting and how children are affected by their different caretakers.

PartII

Eveline stays home and takes over the motherly duties in the household as a teen after a promise was made to her dying mother. Death plays a major role in this story as the author points out that many of Eveline’s friends and family are said to have died at some point. There are several issues presented by Joyce that give rise to Eveline’s internal conflict of breaking the promise to her mother and leaving with Frank. One major problem is that the family is very poor and money is a very precious resource in their lives. To Eveline, Frank represents a new and exciting lifestyle that she has not had the opportunity to experience after taking over the mother role. Her routine, mundane lifestyle that Eveline has led appears to be comforting to her because of its stability, whereas being with Frank is something new and spontaneous. Perhaps Eveline is not so much in love with Frank as she is with the opportunity to embark on a new lifestyle. she gave up a chance to all the things she had wanted.Eveline had been beaten down by her father so many times that she began to accept it and she didn't have to courage to stand up to him. comparing two literature becomes more complicated when it comes to theme.It shows the influence of parent in childrens life.Both of these writing, causes the reader to think deeper and understand the theme of this literature whether they relate to their own life and understand the concept and apply it in the future.

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